The winner of the Kindle Competition is Laura Poyner.
Her entry was:
The dog in the story was called Friel
Five children are living in a world – unaware of their magical heritage and the part they will play in restoring the world, now consumed by an evil Magi force, to what it once was. Now a teenager, the protagonist of the story is Jake who discovers he can read minds and is the heir to the Elementi throne!
When Jake discovers a magical crystal and touches it for the first time, the evil emperor in Eleria summons a demon to destroy the remaining Elementi threatening to overthrow the Magi reign. With the help of Mirim, Jake seeks out the remaining Elementi and we learn of their individual powers.
As representatives of the elements fire, water, air, earth and spirit, the children must reunite to fully realise their fate and unearth their powers.
To celebrate getting through the first round of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award, I’ve reduced Children of the Elementi to just 99 cents on Amazon and Smashwords until the end of March.
Smouldering in the circle the Deoc glared malevolently at Aras. Its body was made entirely of fire but as Aras watched, the flames rescinded. Skin formed over the creature’s body. First its arms and legs, then its face before it was covered completely in skin. Over this, a robe formed until a man stood before him with red and gold-flecked eyes.
‘What do you want?’
‘I need you to kill a boy.’
‘Why would I do that?’ The creature smiled, confident in its power.
‘You have no choice.’
The powerful Elementi Empire spanned over a thousand years, its kings and queens loved and revered by their people and their elemental abilities feared by their enemies. Treachery and Magi illusion destroyed the Empire almost a century ago. All five heirs were thought to be lost.
On present day Earth, fourteen-year-old Jake has an ordinary life of school, bullies, parties… until he stumbles on an ancient crystal. Meanwhile across the dimensions, the Magi Emperor is alerted that not all the Elementi were killed all those years ago. He summons and dispatches Adramelech, an evil fire demon to hunt and kill the last of the Elementi. If the heirs unite their powers and return to Eleria then all Magi gains from the war could be lost.
Can Jake learn to control his growing elemental powers and reunite the other lost children in time?
Children of the Elementi is a 51,000 word young adult adventure set between two worlds. Written by a former school librarian, it is a culmination of book requests and feedback from children and includes magical powers, underwater cities, sword-fighting and a sea battle.